I couldn't force myself past the third chapter. The prologue and the first few chapters were enough to put me off completely.
The idea is interesting but I cannot stick out the amateurish writing style (it reads as awkward as anything, really) and infuriating typical characters to find out what is going on.
I've recently stopped forcing myself to finish books that do not hook me and this one does even less than that - it actively turns me off the story. I would have liked to read more for a more fair review but if I can't even get three chapters in, I think that says enough.